Showing posts with label I suck. Show all posts
Showing posts with label I suck. Show all posts

Sunday, October 7, 2007

Blargh

Been reading N. M. Browne's Warriors of Alavna and Warriors of Camlann. I've read a small snippet of how the third book might open in rasfc, and I'm now terrified of reaching the end of Camlann.

In other news:

I have figured the ship out. It's a nearly 500 meters high cylinder with a radius of seven meters. Most of the middle of the ship contains relatively small water containers, too many to count. In total, at launch, the water masses at nearly 11 million kilograms.

The ship contains an unobtainium drive that converts water to energy (in the Einsteinian E=mc² sense) at 50 % efficiency (the other half is emitted in netrinos). The drive manages, in some fey fashion, to direct that energy as electromagnetic radiation mostly in one direction, providing thrust. The drive provides a sustainable (ship-observed) acceleration of 9,81 m/s², and there is enough fuel (water) to sustain that acceleration for two years. Thus, the ship accelerates for one ship-year, reaching the peak speed of 0.77c (that is, 77 hundreths of the speed of light), coasts for decades and then takes another ship-year to decelerate back to rest near the destination. The acceleration creates an Earth-like gravity with "down" being toward the engines. While coasting, the ship rotates in such a way that up and down are (roughly) perpendicular to the height of the ship, with "down" being either toward or away from the enines, depending on where on the ship one is located. In the exact middle, there would be a zero-gravity zone, while at both ends of the ship, gravity would be the familar one gee.

I still need to figure out what happened on Earth between today and the 2050's. Obviously, someone invented that unobtainium drive, but I need details.

(And no, I'm not asking people to supply possibilities.)

I wrote a small vignette about the ship. Probably can't use it. It's still the only narrative verbiage I've produced.


Ah! It is good of you to have come!

This star here is relatively cool and relatively dim, as stars go, although I agree with you that it is plenty hot and plenty bright, as biologics measure such things.

Never mind the planets that are orbiting that star. We'll get to them eventually, but they're not what is interesting about this star at this particular time. Zoom in on this particular point, billions of kilometers away from the star. See that small stick hurtling toward the star? Good. It's actually not that small, as you'll notice if you zoom in much further. It is actually almost half a kilometer long... what?

Ah, you notice it is a nearly perfect cylinder in shape? Do you think it is artificial? Good, you have a sharp wit. What do you think it is? A spaceship? A good guess, and accurate. Notice how it is slowly turning? I've measured it, it's turning a full circle in one minute. There must be quite a gravity in both ends of the ship, thanks to the rotation.


I feel like crap. I think I need to get out more.

Sunday, September 30, 2007

Non-progress

Week 2: 1355 words
Project: 2718 words

I should have guessed that a bout of easy writing would be followed by hard times. It wasn't such a good thing after all that I managed to write more than the weekly quota on the first day I wrote this week. I haven't touched the writerly keyboard since until today. Today, I have written 190 words of narrative and 62 words of an abortive character study on the medtech Richard.

I know what needs to be accomplished next. I just have no idea how they're going to do that. Must figure out how the ship actually works.

I also notice that Minea is my only real character thus far, and she has no human opposition. To create that opposition and interesting character moments, I'll have to go back to their past, and figure out why anyone would volunteer to crew a hibernation ship (it's a lifetime post, they can't have a middle-life crisis or the ship gets in danger, and they'll be ready to go to an old folks' home when they arrive at the destination, while their passangers wake up all full of their youth), and related to that, what actually happened on Earth between today and roughly the 2060's when the hibernation ship launches, that makes the ships practical, economically viable and attractive for colonists. I had hoped I could just handwave these things, as the story happens Far Away A Lifetime Later, but it obviously affects the characters.

Damn. I had a whole week to develop this stuff with no narrative wordcount pressure and I wasted it.

Damn.

It's bedtime now. I'll do better tomorrow evening, I'm sure.